I had hired you to write the original paper the following is the feedback I received for corrections. I have also attached the original instructions. The flow in the introduction is choppy. Consider how one idea builds on the next and the next. The introduction sets up the paper. Go into proposed solutions in the body of the paper. That comes later. Your task is to present one side and then the other. The body paragraphs stray off topic. What information did you find in the Points of View database? Be sure that gets included in the final version.